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PostSubject: Snippits of writing   Tue Feb 03, 2015 9:15 pm

Here lies the words of Angel, all written once and never visited...

This page will (hopefully) remind me to write some more on these stories! Here are some random snippits of writing.

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The sky was dark. So dark was this sky, that the very ground underneath her feet seemed to be a pale, gray river of hopelessness. It paled the walls of the lonely city street, and created a look of desolation. The only bright color in this sad, sad world was the very clothes she wore, the very hair on her head, and the very, very bright eyes upon her face. How she had ended up here, in this little town with no color, she had not the slightest idea. The people here, too, it seemed, were devoid of color: they were either a sickly gray, in place of the warm yellow and peach skin tones she was so fond of, or a deep, dark ebony instead of the rich, earthy tones of her father's kind. But where were their blue and green and gold eyes? And the red and pink lips, the rainbow colors of nails, the vibrant colors of clothes? The whole town seemed to have faded, gone to sharp greys, and blacks, and creamy whites. All hint of color was gone. ~

What do you think? I wrote the basic story line in 5th grade, but figured I'd jazz it up a bit and re-write it; it seemed too boring to me. How is it now?

(Too lazy to write more right now...) Sleep

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PostSubject: Re: Snippits of writing   Wed Feb 04, 2015 12:45 am

Damn, you guys are amazing at writing. This isn't fair, wish I was good at writing. I am very bad at detail and I get distracted so easy. Plus, I am not very creative so I don't have any good idea for stories and stuff like that.

I like it Moon, if you do come up with a story for that, I will certainly be following you and be reading it from start to end. I really love how the members on this site is very kind and very creative. I really hope everyone is having fun on this site that Hannah, Scarlette. and I have put so much work into. <3 -Ashy~
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PostSubject: Re: Snippits of writing   Thu Feb 05, 2015 12:36 am

Lies, I'm horrible. I find so much wrong with my writing...I bet you'd be great if you could find a topic you're interested in. It took me a while to get interested in writing, but now that I am I tend to try to improve more. The idea for this one was a picture. Our fifth grade teacher here would give us free-pic Fridays; we chose one of the pictures from her cabinet thingee, and then had to write a story about it. I had a girl painting the gray pier into a blue ocean. Pictures are great; another thing for inspiration is roleplays. I take the roleplays I've done and improve them into stories. Sometimes they get so random....

I might actually write more on it, this one interested me, so I wrote on it. I agree; so far the members here have been great. Let's just hope it stays that way when we get more people! <3

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PostSubject: Re: Snippits of writing   Thu Feb 05, 2015 7:07 pm

Kinda depressing in a way, but I love it! You should continue this into a full length short story/book. I think you're really talented, don't stop writing!
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PostSubject: Re: Snippits of writing   Thu Feb 05, 2015 9:11 pm

Good, it's supposed to be. XD I don't generally write very depressing.....so I decided to try it out. Thanks. <3

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